Monday, May 07, 2012

The Prettiest Girl in the World

by Jacob (9)

She has ocean blue eyes
Prettier than a lilac.
She has golden hair
Richer than anything.

But she's only pretty on the outside.
On the inside,
She's worse than a frog.
She acts like she's a queen.
Her army is her temper,
Which inflicts the most damage.
Her servant is her selfishness.
She isn't willing to leave her comfort zone,
Which is her mighty tower.

So you see, 
Looks can deceive.
Just because she looks good
Doesn't mean to serve
Her like a queen.


Grandma B said...

That is amazingly deep.

Jennifer aGlimpseOfOurLife said...

He is young to have that figured out.
I'm visiting and following from the crew.

Anonymous said...

Amazing! He was only nine? Amazing. Wonderful poem, Jacob.